Thursday, 12 January 2012

Treatment

Blurb:
Who knew marbles could lead to so much...

Character biographies:
Kid 1 - A young female rebel that has a heavy influence over the rest of the group and classes herself as the 'leader' She is the person who knocks over the marbles.
Kid 2 - This character is also female and is under a lot of peer pressure from kid 1. She is a very shy and nervous character which is why she can't stand up to her friends.
Kid 3 - Again a girl, she goes along with anything but not under peer pressure she just likes to have fun.
Security Guard - This character is quite big but not very smart and this shows in the was s/he speaks which is how the kids over came the secruity guard.

Statment of indent:
I am the best person to write this story and i have the idea that will make this drama great and popular, i will do this by finding actor/ess' that fit the parts above.

Storyline:
  • 3 kids will walk into the shop doors and go straight to the marbles as they have planned it out
  • the security guard will get suspicious and follow them
  • this is when the kids will knock over the marbles making it look like it was an accident
  • the security guard says he will clean it up
  • While the security guard is busy the kids pick up the sweets they have already selected and run out of the door
  • the security gaurd then notices them running and tries to run himself but slips on the marbles

Over coming the force 
3-4 relevant films/dramas


Themes relevant to your storyline
Over coming the force - Girls have to get past the guard.
Crime - The girls are stealing 
Comedy  

New Treatment

 
Blurb:
Who knew marbles could lead to so much...

Character biographies:
Young Girl: Troubled girl who gets herself into a mess by following the wrong path. She always seems to be in the wrong place at the wrong time.

Statment of indent:
I am the best person to write this story and i have the idea that will make this drama great and popular, i will do this by finding actress that fit the part above.

Storyline:
A young girl gets herself into a mess when she follows the wrong path and finds her self in the wrong place at the wrong time. she ends up running some something that won't be shown in the drama to add suspence and ends in a cliff hanger. The majority of the drama includes a lot of running so I will use a lot of different camera angles to make this interesting.

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